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Breakthrough Copywriting How To Generate Quick Cash With The Written Word - Garfinkel, David

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Matheus Puppe

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Here is a summary of David Garfinkel’s book “Breakthrough Copywriting”:

  • The book aims to teach readers how to write copy that generates quick cash and sales. It provides a fast system for taking complete beginners and teaching them to write profitable ads quickly.

  • Garfinkel’s approach focuses on four key areas: thinking, feeling, insight, and energy level. It teaches how to communicate emotionally with readers in a way that engages both the emotional and rational mind.

  • The goal is to move readers from a “maybe” state to a “yes” through powerful and persuasive copy. The system is designed to be unique by focusing on these four aspects that go beyond just rational thinking.

  • It promises to make copywriting easier, save time, and improve results compared to most traditional copywriting books. Garfinkel aims to provide a straightforward, no-nonsense approach boiled down from his successful career and lessons from top copywriters.

  • The book introduces concepts around building effective messages, the importance of style over just content, engaging readers on an emotional level, pushing the right psychological buttons, and formulas for writing copy that works. It provides a fast yet effective system for learning direct response advertising.

In summary, the book teaches a breakthrough approach to copywriting focused on thinking, feeling, insight and energy to move readers to take action, with the goal of helping readers generate quick cash and sales through the written word.

  • The presenter provides an updated definition of copywriting as using the written word to start, enhance or extend a relationship with customers, which can include but isn’t limited to salesmanship.

  • They discuss how the copywriting process involves multiple steps that customers go through before making a purchase decision, not just the sales message itself. Understanding the full customer journey is important.

  • The Breakthrough Copywriting model covers developing skills in four areas - thinking, feeling, insight, and energy - which the presenter believes are lacking from most copywriting instruction but important for exceptional results.

  • The anatomy of an effective sales message includes an attention-grabbing headline, compelling opening sentence, emotionally compelling case for the product or service, proof or evidence, a call to action, and leaving everything else out to focus on getting the desired response.

  • The goal of direct response copywriting is to get customers to take action, not just change their thinking, as traditional advertising aims to do. It’s about results, not likability or popularity.

In summary, the presentation provides an updated definition of copywriting, emphasizes understanding the full customer journey and testing different approaches, and outlines a holistic model for developing strong copywriting skills focused on results.

  • Traditional school teaching trains people to be reactive, subservient, and obedient, but copywriting requires being proactive to stir emotions and provoke responses.

  • Successful messages stir emotions by building up the “emotional bank account” or thermometer of the prospective customer through repetition, like movie trailers seeing a trailer multiple times. Copywriting lacks this luxury of repetition.

  • The best way to get the emotional bank account where you want it is to truly know your target customer - who they are, what’s on their mind, what their life is like, what their problems and desires are.

  • Before writing any copy, clearly define what your offer or solution is for the customer - don’t worry about headlines, bullets or openings yet. Define the offer itself first.

  • Start with understanding the customer thoroughly, then define the offer or solution, then work on implementing that understanding and offer into the copy itself through emotionally compelling language that builds up the customer’s emotional bank account.

  • Effective copywriting should mimic a conversational style, not a formal written style. It’s like having a direct conversation with the reader.

  • The goal is to grab the reader’s attention and make them “stop” what they’re doing to engage with the copy. Then “lead them by the hand” into learning more.

  • Copy needs to use simple, direct language like in a basic conversation - short words, short sentences, no vague concepts. This doesn’t mean sounding simplistic, just conversational.

  • To improve the conversational style, listen to how real people talk - eavesdrop in public, listen to complaints, gossip, etc. This reveals the language structures people use naturally.

  • Publications like the National Enquirer use a “hot gossip” conversational style that’s effective for copywriting, even if not “literary.” The goal is to mimic how people really talk to each other.

  • By adopting a conversational style rather than a formal written style, copywriting can better engage the reader like a sales presentation and move them to take action.

Here is a cliché-ridden summary of the key points:

Writing copy that really grabs attention and gets results is tougher than it looks. But with some tried-and-true techniques, you can rise to the challenge.

First and foremost, know thy customer! You need to get into their head and walk a mile in their shoes. Figure out what makes them tick, what bubbles to the surface of their brain, and what desires dwell in the deepest desires of their heart.

Once you’ve bonded with your audience on a soulful level, the next step is embracing the product. revisit that magical moment when the ingenious idea was born in a flash of brilliance. Revive the thrill of those early discoveries so readers join you on the wondrous journey.

Then comes the clincher - speaking the lingo! A doctor pitching health cures must ditch dyspepsia for “upset tummy.” Echo the everyday expressions of your tribe.

With customer and curios in hand, you’re ready for the big reveal. Craft a headline that taps into drives to gain or save moolah, spare time & effort, boost well-being, or find fun and ease aches.

Bulleted points and a bodacious offer give your prose extra pop. With practice, your sales pitches will sound like friendly chats between old pals instead of slick come-ons.

So roll up your sleeves, steep in that target tribe, and unleash your inner wordsmith. With commitment and these classic techniques, victory can be yours!

Here are the key points about effective headline writing from the passage:

  • Copywriting templates provide a way to quickly write effective headlines even without extensive experience. Templates give you proven basics to start with and master.

  • The templates provided are universal and can be adapted to almost any product or service.

  • The templates target common wants and desires of prospects like making/saving money, avoiding problems, gaining abilities, etc.

  • Headlines should focus on the end benefit the customer wants, not your product features.

  • Some effective templates included are “Who else wants to…”, “Give me…and I’ll…”, “Do you recognize the 7 early warning signs of…”, “Get rid of (problem) once and for all”, etc.

  • Examples are given for how to adapt each template to various industries and products.

  • Key is to understand your customers’ secretly desired goals, dreams, complaints to craft headlines that engage their emotions.

  • Use benefits prospects are already emotionally invested in or problems they acknowledge to most effectively grab their attention.

The overall message is that copywriting templates provide a starting point for crafting effective headlines even without experience, by focusing on universal customer benefits and using proven headline styles.

  • In the 1970s/80s, there was a marketer named Bo who would run full-page newspaper ads with the headline “The Lazy Man’s Way to Riches”.

  • The ads told stories of how Bo used mail-order and information products to become very wealthy. Of course, he was selling an information product himself through mail order to make even more money.

  • The headline “The Lazy Man’s Way” appealed to people who weren’t actually lazy but felt busy. It suggested a way to achieve wealth or other goals with little effort.

  • Other variants of this template could include headlines like “The Lazy Executive’s Way to Get a Great New Job” or “The Lazy Person’s Way to Get Around Town” for a car service.

  • The template works well for both headlines and subheads to intrigue and attract potential customers looking for easier or less effortful ways to achieve their goals.

  • A key part of Bo’s success was crafting intriguing headlines that tapped into peoples’ desire for easier paths to success while also indirectly marketing his own information products.

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  • An offer is not just describing the product/service - it’s presenting it in a way that shows value and makes the customer want it.

  • There are three types of offers - products, services, and information products.

  • Key aspects of a good offer include showing what the customer can do with it, what it will do for them, adding bonuses, and addressing customer questions like cost and guarantees.

  • A “product offer” maximizes the perceived and real value of the product. It shows how the product will help the customer and makes its benefits very clear, for example through added instruction materials. The goal is to add enough value to justify a higher price.

  • Other offer types are service offers and information product offers, which have some differences but similarly aim to clearly present value and benefits to attract customers. Overall the summary focuses on crafting offers that effectively position and sell the product/service through emphasizing customer needs and value.

Here is a summary of the key points about using stories in copywriting from the provided text:

  • Stories are very powerful at reducing or eliminating sales resistance from prospects. They help address skepticism, unfamiliarity, and price objections.

  • Stories bypass people’s critical thinking and are harder to argue with than opinions or claims. People may not believe the story but won’t argue with it.

  • Stories engage people emotionally in a way that facts and features alone can’t. They tap into something primal in how humans process and share information.

  • Stories should include motion or action to qualify as a story, not just static descriptions. Even a short statement can be a story if something is happening.

  • When crafting copy, stories can be used to help prospects envision using the product, connect emotionally with benefits, and help the solution “come to life” in their mind in a memorable way.

  • While not always needed, stories are particularly useful when prospects have sales resistance or when familiarizing them with an unfamiliar product or service in a compelling manner. They help reduce barriers to purchasing.

So in summary, stories are a powerful copywriting tool for engaging readers emotionally, bypassing critical thinking, and helping prospects envision your solution in a memorable way that can increase purchase likelihood.

  • Stories are a powerful way to communicate information quickly and effectively in selling. They get your message across while making implications to open people up to what you’re saying.

  • Using stories helps people get to know you quickly, which is important in business since people like doing business with those they feel comfortable with. Stories act as a shortcut for building trust.

  • There are different types of stories you can use, like “The Herald” to introduce new ideas and concepts, taking people from something familiar to the discovery of your new product or service.

  • “The Dissolver” answers prospects’ objections by providing true stories as evidence to change them from a disbeliever to a believer. The key is identifying the root disbelief and crafting a story with evidence to the contrary.

  • Stories engage people’s imaginations and feed their innate desire for narratives. They allow for quicker and better learning compared to facts alone. People also identify more with story characters.

  • Crafting stories with visual descriptions, dialogue, feelings and a clear beginning, middle and end makes them more compelling and easy to follow. Stories are a direct route to the unconscious mind to stir desires and learning.

  • Negative Optism in copywriting involves acknowledging and validating the negative feelings or problems a prospect may be experiencing. This builds empathy, rapport, and trust.

  • You show the prospect you understand how they feel by sharing a specific, relatable personal experience you’ve had with a similar problem. Make it as vivid and real as possible.

  • This helps the prospect see that you truly understand their situation and experience, rather than coming across as detached or lacking real-world experience. It creates a bond.

  • Some prospects may be quite resistant or skeptical due to their negative mindset or problems. Emotional triggers can help divert this resistance and transfer their emotional energy from negative to positive.

  • One such trigger is “Anger to Envy to Offer.” You arouse the prospect’s anger about a familiar problem/situation, then contrast it with a positive example that creates envy, before making your offer of a solution. This leverages powerful emotions like anger and jealousy to motivate the prospect.

So in summary, Negative Optism and emotional triggers like “Anger to Envy to Offer” help copywriting build empathy, rapport and overcome resistance by addressing prospects’ negative feelings and experiences in a relatable way.

  • The passage discusses different psychological techniques that can be used in sales and marketing copy to appeal to people’s emotions and build empathy or address doubts.

  • One technique is to use examples of commonly experienced human emotions like misery or embarrassment to show the reader you understand what they are going through and build rapport (“empathy through shared misery”).

  • Another is using testimonials structured in a way that take the reader from an initial state of doubt to gained confidence in the product or service.

  • Appealing to people’s innate desire to get a good deal or “bargain hunter” mentality by pointing out how they can get something expensive for free or much less than others.

  • “Emotional math” involves implicitly addressing potential objections in a way that leaves the reader answering their own objections unconsciously without realizing.

To contrast with a positive tone and potentially cause envy:

While these techniques aim to resolve negative emotions, using your understanding to sincerely help others discover solutions could build trust over time. Focusing on shared hopes rather than hardships may uplift readers seeking positive change.

Here are the key points about this copywriting technique:

  • It discusses using statements to pre-emptively address objections that a prospect may have, without explicitly stating the objection.

  • The copywriter makes a statement, envisions what the prospect’s reaction may be, but does not say it out loud. They immediately follow up with a statement that answers that unstated objection.

  • This gets the objection response “under the radar” without it having to consciously register for the reader. It keeps the copy moving forward positively.

  • These types of statements should be used prominently, like in the headline, positioning, near the close, or in a postscript - not buried in the middle of paragraphs.

  • The goal is to immediately engage the reader emotionally and get them hooked before objections can form.

  • It provides a subtle way to address concerns veiled customers may have, while keeping the tone positive.

The technique aims to disguise objection handling so the reader processes the benefits without conscious resistance forming first. It seeks to guide them toward an enthusiastic buying frame of mind.

  • People may want to meet someone new but also have doubts or reservations about it. They are torn between these conflicting desires.

  • A subtle yet persuasive statement is made to blur the line between what the prospect would readily accept and what needs more scrutiny. An example given is “Finding the right person who’s both fun and a good influence on your kids are more plentiful than you think.”

  • This statement primes the prospect to more readily accept the flat out claim that follows, in this case “So from now on you’ll start every relationship on the right foot.” The prospect is convinced of this even though they don’t fully understand how they came to accept it as true.

  • The statement in the middle is what leads them from accepting plain facts to believing the desired conclusion. It hints at a positive surprise without evidence, taking advantage of people’s openness to surprises to lower their defenses momentarily.

So in summary, this technique seduces people into an idea by first establishing common ground, then hinting at a surprising positive without proof, before asserting the desired conclusion as fact. It works by exploiting human psychology and the blurring of critical thinking.

Here are the key points about the DNA themes in powerful copywriting:

  • Themes like “From Humiliating Defeat to Triumphant Victory” and “The Secret Formula for Success & Prestige” tap into universally inspiring stories that motivate people.

  • You can incorporate these themes by structuring your copy around a story that follows those archetypal patterns. Start with a problem or defeat, then show how the product/offer solves it and leads to victory/success.

  • “Your Unrecognized Greatness Has Been Discovered” plays on people’s subconscious sense that there is more to them than what is externally recognized. You imply that the offer reveals their innate qualities of status, importance, or greatness.

  • Examples given are the Charles Atlas story, the Wall Street Journal letter, and implying one has an important message by writing an e-book.

  • These DNA themes can be woven throughout copy, especially at decision points like early on, before benefits lists, after announcing price, and in postscripts, to give that extra push. Using these themes taps into powerful psychological and storytelling factors.

  • The offer reveals the reader’s unrecognized greatness that has been discovered. This introduces the idea that by taking the offer, one will unlock or achieve something great.

  • When crafting the copy, personalize how the greatness applies specifically to the reader. Show how the offer allows them to easily achieve this greatness.

  • The examples given were promotional strategies and headlines used by successful marketers in the past to generate interest and sales. Things like offering a free booklet on investing (Merrill Lynch ad) or qualifying who the offer is right for (Gary Bencivenga seminar).

  • When putting all the elements together, the copy should start where the reader is currently at, take them on an interesting journey, and end by motivating them to take the desired action. The flow and order of elements doesn’t need to follow a strict formula, as long as it achieves these outcomes.

  • Key things to remember are starting where the reader is, personalizing it to them, showing how easy it is via the offer, and maintaining an enjoyable storyline that guides them to take action. The length just needs to be enough to accomplish those goals.

  • Enter the conversation already going on in the customer’s mind by anticipating what they might be thinking or asking themselves. Write as if having a conversation with them.

  • Remember this is a sales conversation, not a report or article. Use short words like “you” and “me” to make it personal. Include emotional, visceral, and visual words to engage the reader.

  • If a part of the copy is not advancing the sale, moving it forward to a close, then it is diminishing the sale. Stay focused on providing information that leads the reader to action.

  • Include proofs like facts, case studies, statistics or testimonials to back up any claims. Proof is important for both sales and legal reasons.

  • Make it very clear how the reader should take action and design the process to be as easy as possible. Find and eliminate any bugs that could cause confusion or prevent action.

The key is writing in a conversational style that moves the reader towards the desired action, focuses on advancing the sale at every point, and provides proof or credibility for any claims being made. Readability, calls to action and ease of purchase are also important.

Here are a few key points about how the summary applies to copywriting:

  • Believing in your product/service and being passionate about its benefits is critical for effective copywriting. Readers will sense if the writer is just going through the motions vs truly believing.

  • Deeply understanding the target customer and their wants/needs/pain points is essential for writing compelling copy that resonates. Generic demographics aren’t enough.

  • Thoroughly comprehending the unique value and experience provided by the product/service allows the writer to clearly convey the benefits and implications in a meaningful way for customers.

  • Putting the reader/consumer perspective first and crafting copy from their point of view increases credibility and persuasiveness. The focus should be on how it improves their life rather than just describing features.

  • Continually practicing and honing copywriting skills through real-world application and mentorship can boost proficiency over time, as with any communications-based skill. Iterative learning is important.

So in summary, effective copywriting stems from passionate belief, deep customer insight, clear value communication, reader-centric crafting and dedicated skill-building - as captured in the summary points.

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